Feedback on First 30 Seconds of Music Video

I asked a focus group of girls aged 15 to 17 to watch my music video so far. I got lots of positive feedback about how the lip syncing is in time, and the drum being hit in time with the music being effectiveand interesting. I had only little negative feedback about some of my shots being shaking which I am in the process of changing and improving. I will on all of the feedback I have recieved and try to make my video better.